“Enemies” 1/14 – New story/old story

 
I did it. I finished fixing “Enemies”. Oh, it’ll probably go through other edits, but for the most part, it has the scenes added in that I needed.

And now I’m posting it here, in chaptered segments.

Just as a reminder, this was originally written as a Christmas present for nemo_gravis, bastardsnow, and the great and wonderful aadler, for all the help they’ve given me over the years. (Most especially to aadler. And you can blame him for the fact that I write, and subject you to it; he’s the one who taught me how.)

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There you go. Hope you liked it.