Well, I've finished your story, and I'm posting it now. Hope you enjoy it. (And again, the dialogue is almost verbatem. To me, the story wouldn't be the same with different dialogue. I might add a few things here and there, but... my goal with a remix isn't the same as most people's are. Most people, I've noticed, do what they would have done if the story had been theirs to begin with. Which is, I'll admit, the point to the remix. My goal is to take the story, but show something new within it. New information, new POV, new something.)
Remix
Date: 2008-04-22 05:49 pm (UTC)