You continue to build on the characterization of Kathy/Angel, making her increasingly (but not jarringly) distinct from canon Angel, and continue to lay out the ‘missing’ narrative from my original. I thought in Part Two that you had varied from my story (by having the new Scoobs discover KA’s vampire nature all but immediately), but Kathy’s truthful evasion manages to steer clear of this.
It does seem to me that Giles — with his longer and deeper knowledge of supernatural ‘norms’ — would be extremely inquisitive regarding (or even directly suspicious of) some non-Slayer person who could slug it out with vampires and come away unmaimed. This is a potential snare that your more proactive Kathy/Angel has come within range of, which the original Liam/Angel avoided through the apathy and passivity he still hadn’t yet got beyond.
(I’ve also posted further on my own WIP. Maybe we can both finish before the month is out.)
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Date: 2017-09-28 02:04 am (UTC)It does seem to me that Giles — with his longer and deeper knowledge of supernatural ‘norms’ — would be extremely inquisitive regarding (or even directly suspicious of) some non-Slayer person who could slug it out with vampires and come away unmaimed. This is a potential snare that your more proactive Kathy/Angel has come within range of, which the original Liam/Angel avoided through the apathy and passivity he still hadn’t yet got beyond.
(I’ve also posted further on my own WIP. Maybe we can both finish before the month is out.)