Your feedback means a lot to me. I tried to use the song togood effect without it being a songfic. I suppose some people might say that it is, but i would disagree with them on that, since the story is the story and the song is simply part of the framework for it.

I honestly can't find a line that I dislike or that I would change, which, coming from me says a lot, since I'm my own worst critic in terms of being satisfied.