Thank you very much! I always enjoy your comments because you go in depth and don't just leave it at "I like this".

Willow didn't get a turn because the two of them had mostly worked through their issues at that point, thanks to, as you pointed out, the yellow crayon world save-age. I thought about including Drusilla, but ultimately decided not to.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story! I liked the original a lot (I love a lot of your stories, really, so finding only ONE to do is always hard).