kerravonsen: Buffy facing a mirror image of herself: "Shadow Self" (Buffy)
Kathryn A. ([personal profile] kerravonsen) wrote in [personal profile] sroni 2012-01-12 12:50 pm (UTC)

Here via fandom-snowflake

"Bridges" by Tassos (Stargate/Buffy)
Characters: Jack O'Neill, Xander Harris
Size: 669K
Elsewhere: http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-3138/Tassos+Bridges.htm
After the collapse of Sunnydale, Jack gets a call about a woman he knew over twenty years ago . . . and the son he never knew he had.

I like this story, the characterisation, the way it isn't all easy and isn't all hard, the way both Jack and Xander are smart enough to figure out that the other has secrets.

On the downside, there are a number of spelling mistakes, things like "their/there" and "vile/vial" and so on. That's an irritating fflaw which could so easily have been fixed. Most of the time I could figure out what the correct word was meant to be, but there was at least one time that the sentence in question ended up so mangled I was left scratching my head.

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